Readers Respond:
Write More
"I also am very curious about the rest
of Lefty's story. I really want to know how it turns out."
Miss Molly
"Lefty, are you still recovering from
that rice that went down the wrong way? If you don't write
more, your narrator will forever be half-choked!"
"Lefty, Get on with the story already!"
"Write the next chapter!!"
"I want you to furnish the next installment."
"I love the story, i can't go on another
day if you don't write the next installment. PLEASE!"
"I'm releasing
a pack of trained marmots to come down there and make Lefty
write more of the story..."
Write Less
"I think that this story is a highly
unlikely one and the future stories should be more common
ones, not ones that are for entertaining purposes
it's not an American Soap Opera!"
Write in Español
"Me podrian dar informes sobre alguna
compañia que acomode a trabajar de niñeras
de medio tiempo ya que estudiaria ingles el otro medio.
Gracias!"
Write It Differently
"I don't know how or why you came
up with the name 'Tazanowski',
but it is the name (although spelled Taczanowski) of an
important aristocratic Catholic Polish-German family
the Counts von Taczanowski. I think you need to change this
name if Taz is to be a Jewish character! Tazkowicz? Tazkowich?
Maybe..."
"Shermie should confess that he was with a woman
and got her pregnant, but she wanted to move away and he
never sees the baby. But he loves Leah and wants to marry
her and let her have his kids."
How Is Shermie Doing?
"He should date Leah. She is a nice woman."
"Yes he should show for his date."
"He sucks as a date."
Survey Results
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Great
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Good
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OK
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Weak
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Bad
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The writing is...
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14
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5
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2
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0
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0
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Very Interesting
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Interesting
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OK
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Boring
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The story is...
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14
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6
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1
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0
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Strongly Agree
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Agree
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Disagree
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Strongly Disagree
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I think that Love & Learn should publish the next
installment in this story.
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16
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3
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1
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0
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Strongly Agree
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Agree
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Disagree
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Strongly Disagree
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I think that Love & Learn should continue to
publish
stories about relationships.
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16
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4
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0
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0
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